Сегодня разберем тему “In any occupation discipline is more important than talent”, как правильно перефразировать, привести аргументы, не уйти от темы и получить 14 баллов.
Для начала, переводим тему.
“В любом деле дисциплина важнее таланта”
Выделяем ключевые слова.
“В любом деле дисциплина важнее таланта”
Подбираем синонимы
Discipline - organisation, following the rules, control, order
Occupation - activity, work, stuff to do, hobby, studying, job, vocation, trade, profession
Important - essential, significant, prominent. main, crucial
Talent - gift, endowment, ability, capability, genius, flair, knack, head, aptitude,
Перефразируем
- лексически
In any work self-organisation is more crucial than genius.
- грамматически
Talent is not so important as discipline in any occupation.
- и так и так
Whatever occupation a person has, self-organisation is more significant than genius for it.
Для подбора аргументов может пригодиться лексика по теме personality and discipline
Приводим аргументы
PRO
- Discipline compared to talent is a basis for any activity because it allows a person to stick to a plan, reach goals in limited time and not procrastinate.
- Discipline is a quality that guarantees that a person follows the instructions and never makes mistakes thus successfully achieving the result, while talent only may enhance the intuition to avoid those possible mistakes.
- Discipline is necessary to fulfil promises, not be late for meeting, despite some activities that are not directly connected with cooperation, inevitably, a person should communicate with colleagues, classmates, partners or clients, and the ability to organize yourself is of paramount importance.
CON
- Talent is an ability to do something better than most people. In case of competition a talented person can do better and is more creative and productive than others, that gives numerous advantages.
- Talented people usually easily immerse themselves in a working process, get into a flow state and can easily work for hours without fail, which raises their productivity.
- Talent is not only an ability, but love, loyalty and devotion to your occupation, so a gifted person is intrinsically motivated to do his or her best, which is much more effective than outer incentives such as discipline and control.
Be in a flow - быть в потоке, творческое состояние полного погружения в деятельность.
immerse yourself in- погрузиться
devote yourself to - посвятить себя
be gripped with - быть захваченным (увлеченным)
procrastinate - прокрастинация, лень, нежелание заняться делом, поиск отговорок
Я бы лучше сравнила труд и талант, тут действительно контраст, а дисциплина это просто следование правилам и контроль.
Пишем заключение.
In conclusion, discipline is\is not of a greater importance than talent.
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