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Sometimes journalists have to take ready-made material and rewrite it in other words. The leads also have to be changed. We will show you how this is done using the example of three leads


1. Before: The Lego assortment has been replenished with a set of the Land Rover Classic Defender 90 model designer. The release is timed to the 75th anniversary of the legendary car. In honor of this event, brands offer to take a trip to the most inaccessible Lego store in the world, located in the highlands of Scotland.

After: For the 75th anniversary of the legendary Land Rover Classic Defender 90 car, Lego has released a new set of the designer of the same car. Famous brands offer to visit the most inaccessible Lego store, which is located in the highlands of Scotland

2. Before: Ben Affleck has become the main character of the new issue of The Hollywood Reporter magazine. In a large-scale interview, the actor spoke about his relationship with his wife Jennifer Lopez and his struggle with alcoholism. Ben also answered questions about his career in the film industry, which has not always been easy.

After: Ben Affleck has been suffering from alcohol addiction for the past few years. He underwent various methods of treatment, but to no avail. Recently, the Hollywood actor became the main character of the new issue of The Hollywood Reporter magazine. He gave a big interview where he talked about his struggle with alcohol.

3. Before: Michael Boatwright, 28, Dedrick Williams, 26, and Trayvon Newsome, 24, were also convicted of armed robbery by a jury that rendered its verdict less than an hour after beginning its eighth day of deliberations.

After: Michael Boatwright, 28, Derrick Williams, 26, and Trayvon Newsom, 24, were found guilty of armed robbery resulting in murder. It is reported that the sentence of life imprisonment will soon come into force.
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