На днях мы с моей ученицей Дарьей, которая готовится к ЕГЭ, делали вот это задание из письменной части:
На первый взгляд, оно простое, тема даже несколько нудная, но почему-то оно вызвало некоторые затруднения у Дарьи.
Я подготовила свой вариант выполнения этого задания, воспользовавшись идеями ученицы, но описала их своими словами, чтобы у нее был образец того, как можно по-другому оформить это эссе.
Nowadays a lot of people want to be healthy and prefer leading a healthy lifestyle. I am doing a project on how people stay healthy in Zetland. I have found a table with the results of a survey conducted among them. Now I am going to analyse the data and give my opinion on the subject of the project.
According to the table, 42% of the respondents do not eat fast food in order to stay healthy. 24% of them have a balanced diet. 22% of the surveyed do sports and only 2% do morning exercises to stay healthy.
It is worth mentioning that the number of the respondents who choose the option “Not eating fast food” (42%) is almost twice as high as the number of those who do sports (22%). In my opinion, it is not surprising because it is easy to stop eating fast food, whereas doing sports requires a lot of effort and people are not ready to make it.
Unfortunately, some problems can arise with these approaches to staying healthy. For example, doing sports is rather time-consuming and people are too busy to find time for physical activity. To solve this problem, people should manage their time properly and do enough to keep fit.
In conclusion, I believe that it is very important to stay healthy. Those who lead a healthy lifestyle have a lot of energy, look attractive and live longer.