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3 ФАКТОРА ДЛЯ МАКСИМАЛЬНОГО БАЛЛА В IELTS General Writing Task 1

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend.
In your letter
- explain why you have moved
- describe the new house
- invite your friend to come and visit
Hi Mike,
Hope you're doing great! [НАЧИНАЕМ С ЧЕТКОЙ ЦЕЛИ В ПЕРВОЙ СТРОКЕ ПИСЬМА 👉🏻] I’ve got some exciting news—I've just moved to a new place and I'm loving it!
[НЕФОРМАЛЬНЫЙ ТОН - ПРОПУСКАЕМ ПОДЛЕЖАЩЕЕ ‘I’, ИСПОЛЬЗУЕМ ВОПРОСЫ И ВОСКЛИЦАНИЯ 👉🏻] Remember how I used to complain about feeling like I was living in a shoebox? Well, I have to take my words back, that was actually spacious compared to when my boyfriend John moved in with me! We started feeling really claustrophobic about living in such a little cramped one bedroom flat, so I knew it was time for a change.
[ПОДРОБНО РАСКРЫВАЕМ КАЖДЫЙ ПУНКТ ЗАДАНИЯ👉🏻] So, I started looking around for something with a bit more space, somewhere I could stretch out

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend.
In your letter
- explain why you have moved
- describe the new house
- invite your friend to come and visit

Hi Mike,

Hope you're doing great! [НАЧИНАЕМ С ЧЕТКОЙ ЦЕЛИ В ПЕРВОЙ СТРОКЕ ПИСЬМА 👉🏻] I’ve got some exciting news—I've just moved to a new place and I'm loving it!

[НЕФОРМАЛЬНЫЙ ТОН - ПРОПУСКАЕМ ПОДЛЕЖАЩЕЕ ‘I’, ИСПОЛЬЗУЕМ ВОПРОСЫ И ВОСКЛИЦАНИЯ 👉🏻] Remember how I used to complain about feeling like I was living in a shoebox? Well, I have to take my words back, that was actually spacious compared to when my boyfriend John moved in with me! We started feeling really claustrophobic about living in such a little cramped one bedroom flat, so I knew it was time for a change.

[ПОДРОБНО РАСКРЫВАЕМ КАЖДЫЙ ПУНКТ ЗАДАНИЯ👉🏻] So, I started looking around for something with a bit more space, somewhere I could stretch out and breathe a little easier. And I hit the jackpot with this new place! Instead of just a bigger flat I hoped for, I’ve found a cozy house with a spacious kitchen almost for the same price as my old place. Of course, it’s not big, but you know what the best part is? The backyard, which is like my own little sanctuary where I've already started planting some flowers and herbs.

[ЕСЛИ ЗАДАЧА - ПРИГЛАСИТЬ, УКАЗЫВАЕМ ВРЕМЯ И МЕСТО👉🏻] Anyway, I'd love for you to come check out the new house! We’re throwing a small housewarming party, just a little get-together with the closest friends and a barbecue in the backyard. We are celebrating our new house this Friday evening, start time 7pm, location Green street, 55. I'd be thrilled if you could join us!

Please let me know if you can make it so I can make sure there's enough food and drinks for everyone.

Can't wait to see you soon!

Take care,
Anastasia