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Practice IELTS with US. STYLE VIOLATIONS. DISCUSSION ESSAY.

OUR GROUP HAS STARTED, HURRAY! What we have covered today at the lesson:

  • We have got acquainted to each other, starting with working in pairs. The task was to find as many similarities as possible. WOW! We have found so much in common!!!
  • We have talked over the key targets for the course, we also have set up our own targets based on our needs and the level of skills.
  • We have discussed the first topic, happiness (a set of questions, 2 min presentations, pair work).
  • We have got acquainted to the IELTS style requirements (see the materials below).
  • We have assessed one essay, based on the requirements (see the STYLE CHECK LIST below).
  • We have discussed and practiced the some useful vocabulary.
  • The HW task is to write a discussion essay.

WOULD YOU LIKE TO TRY THE PRACTICE WITH US?

If YES, Do the following two tasks:

  • Assess the essay sample first (the file "style criteria" is also attached). What's your score? Place your score in your comment.
  • Download the essay criteria assessment. Write your discussion essay, the topic is

*Some people think that education is one of the factors that affect happiness. Others believe that there is no link between education and happiness. Discuss both views and express your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.*

Attach the essay in the png-format to the comment.

- BY THE WAY, DO YOU THINK THAT HIGHER EDUCATION CAN HELP YOUR CAREER DEVELOPMENT? OR YOU MAY DEVELOP THE NECESSARY SKILLS ON THE WAY?

- May your answer depend on the chosen sphere?

We are going to discuss the questions at our next meeting! AND! You have a chance to join our discussion here! Simply place your answer in the comments, after your essay analysis!

Practice with US!

LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR REPLIES! HAVE A GREAT WEEK!

PS: The useful links to write your essay are here:

Useful expressions: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gCo9L1nLlQ0&t=22s

The structure of the essay: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GGUSG6HYF5w

Discussion essay Language: http://ieltsliz.com/ielts-writing-task-2-discussion-essay-expressions/

Discussion essay samples (models): http://ieltsliz.com/ielts-discussion-essay-model-answer/

GOOD LUCK!

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