Сегодня мы будем выполнять задание 38.1, будем учиться писать эссе в формате ЕГЭ с опорой на график/таблицу.
Формат задания
При выполнении этого задания необходимо придерживаться нейтрального стиля – т.е. избегать стяжённых форм (напр., don't, isn't), риторических вопросов, фразовых глаголов и проч.
Также важно выдерживать структуру и содержание ответа, которые обозначены в задании. Задание – см. ниже.
Задание 38.1
Мой вариант ответа
I am working on a project that focuses on the reasons why a lot of adolescents in Zetland decide to pursue a career in the sphere of information technology. I have found a table with statistics that provides insight into the reasons why teenagers choose such a career path. In this essay, I will analyse the data in the table and comment on the subject.
It is evident from the table that 25% of the respondents choose an IT profession because there are a lot of vacancies in this sphere. Such options as the opportunity to work from home (20%) and to create (14%) are also relatively popular.
More than a third of the teenagers in Zetland (33%) choose an IT career due to a lucrative salary, whereas only 8% of the respondents mention the chance to develop as their primary consideration in choosing a career. This might signify that for teenagers in Zetland tangible factors such as money outweigh abstract ideas with respect to career decisions.
Many IT professionals can work from home, which is convenient. However, people who spend most of their time at home can experience social isolation. One possible solution could be to find a hobby that involves communicating with people, such as attending a book club or an acting school.
In conclusion, I am convinced that in today’s world information technology penetrates into all spheres of life. This is why mastering IT is essential for success.
Заключительное слово
Буду благодарна за обратную связь. Особенно - если читатель окажется экспертом ЕГЭ-2023/2024.