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There is no doubt that ..... is a very important/popular part/step/period/choice/problem in/of people's life/modern world. .. As a part of my project .......(тема), I have found a table/chart containing some relevant data of the opinion polls and now I am going to comment on it.
According to the information from the table/chart .....(кто отвечал) were offered 5 ....(types/ways, что предложено) and were to choose (the most important/their preferable/the most interesting...) one. (Делим на три группы по логике) It can be clearly seen, that .... tops/top the list, accounting for ...percent of respondents (respectively). It is followed/they are followed by .... with ...%. ..... is at the bottom of the list, as it/they was/were chosen by only ...% of applicants.
It is surprising/surprising that ... is ....times as popular as ......, because .....ваша логика, комментарий.
Although....ситуация., ...проблема.... and it seems to be a problem. Raising awareness of this issue/situation can be the first step of solving it. Also, promoting..... among....can improve the situation.
In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that.....
There is no doubt that environmental protection is a very important problem of modern world. . As a part of my project on what environmental problems Zetland teenagers consider to be the most dangerous, I have found a table containing some relevant data of the opinion poll and now I am going to comment on it.(55)
According to the information from the table, Zetland teenagers were offered 5 environmental problems and were to choose the most dangerous one. It can be clearly seen, that global warming tops the list, accounting for 44% of respondents . It is followed by air pollution and water pollution with 22% and 16% respectively. Deforestation and rare species extinction are at the bottom of the list, as they were chosen by only 12% and 6% of applicants respectively.(77)
It is not surprising, that global warming is considered more than 7 times as popular as rare species extinction, because the consequences of this problem are obvious and often discussed in social and mass media, while the extinction of some animals does not look like a big danger.(48)
Although teenagers know the main problems of the environment, they do not understand the opportunities they have to reduce these dangers and it seems to be a problem. Raising awareness of these issues can be the first step of solving it. Also promoting ecological projects can improve the situation.(49)
In conclusion, I am firmly convinced, that teenagers should clearly understand the danger of environmental problems and get used to behaviour, which can help our planet to survive.(28)
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