As part of the "Newspapers" section, we studied the structure of building articles for this media. We paid special attention to leads. After all, as it turned out, this part of the article is the smallest, but the most important. After all, it is the lead that should lure the reader. One of the tasks is to remake the proposed leads according to the learned rules. Showing the result :)
Lead A
Before
On Saturday, Nov 30, the Springfield Garden Club will hold its regular monthly meeting, at Bill Johnson's house at 1311 Twelfth Street this time, this time at 12 noon to discuss seed catalogs for spring planting.
After
On Nov 30, at 12 p.m., the Springfield Garden Club will hold a monthly meeting dedicated to discussing the seed catalog for spring planting. Address: 1311 Twelfth Street.
Lead B
Before
Bill Knox of Springfield won $14 million in the state lottery in the drawing Nov 6. He bought the winning ticket at a neighborhood convenience store Tuesday morning when he stopped in for coffee on his way to work.
After
On November 6, Bill Knox from Springfield won $14 million in the state lottery. The man bought the winning ticket on his way to work, stopping by for coffee out of habit.