Четыре аспекта (4 части плана) разобраны. Осталось организовать наше высказывание на все 100%, то есть:
👉 добавить приветствие с обращением (Привет, друг! Я тут нашёл 2 картинки по нашему проекту «название» и хочу поделиться идеями).
👉 проверить наличие логических связок (это чтобы переходы от аспекта к аспекту норм были);
👉 добавить заключительную часть(Это всё, что об этом думаешь?).
На секундочку, это раздел «Организация высказывания» (смотри таблицу), за это дают 3 балла😉
Итак, ниже приведен вариант написания задания по плану:
Приветствие.
Hi, Maria! I’ve just found two photos for our project "Household chores in a city and in the country" and I’d like to tell you about them and share my ideas.
Аспект 1.
These two pictures are perfect for our project as they show two ways of doing household chores.
In the first picture we can see a woman who is dusting the furniture in her flat.
In the second picture we can see a family collecting leaves in their garden.
There are some differences between the pictures.
In picture one the woman is doing housework alone inside her flat in a city while in picture two there are three members of the family working together outdoors, near their country house.
Аспект 2.
I believe both ways of doing chores have their advantages.
Doing household chores in a city helps you focus only on indoor activities in your flat. You don’t think about the territory outside your flat.
At the same time at the same time it’s good when people do some activities in the yard because they can breathe fresh air and be close to nature.
Аспект 3.
However, both ways of doing household chores have their disadvantages.
When you do housework in a flat, you can be easily distracted by a phone call, a movie or a cup of coffee and leave your task incomplete.
Doing outdoor chores often requires more physical skills and they are very tiring.
Аспект 4.
As for me, I prefer household chores in a city because doing household chores in a flat in a city takes less time than doing chores in the country.
Заключение.
That’s all for now. What do you think about the photos and my ideas?
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