It’s not right to be strict with little children. Эссе для ЕГЭ, аргументы, лексика.

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Не правильно быть строгими с маленькими детьми.

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Не правильно быть строгими с маленькими детьми.

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not right - wrong, erroneous, mistaken

strict - severe, austere, not indulgent, not permissive

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Лексически:

it is wrong to be severe with small children.

Грамматический

Being strict with little children is not right.

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PRO

• Little children lack self-consciousness and can hardly be responsible for their mistakes, so it is better not to be strict with them but to demonstrate correct behavior that they will imitate.
• Little children often fail to control their emotions and extra strictness can only harm them, so an adult should show empathy instead of severeness.
• Being strict is not the best strategy to educate small children, patience and love are more suitable for them.

CON

• Permissive parents often overlook the moment when children start misbehaving severely and become uncontrollable. This is a big mistake because such children may grow into delinquent teenagers, so strictness is necessary for a proper upbringing.
• There is no other way to explain to a small child what is right or wrong but to be strict to them and punish them for breaking the rules.
• Being strict and just at the same time helps a parent become the leading figure in a little child’s life that can be trusted.

Пишем заключение.

All it all, being strict with little children is\is not right

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