Сегодня рассмотрим тему “Fast food outlets should be closed”, как перефразировать тему, привести аргументы и не уйти от темы, написав эссе на максимальный балл.
Начнем с перевода.
“Точки продажи фаст-фуд следует закрыть”
Выделим ключевые слова.
“Точки продажи фаст-фуд следует закрыть”
Находим синонимы
- Fast food - mass-produced pre-prepared ingredients, speedy food service, food cooked in limited time, ready-cooked food, pre-prepared meats, junk food
- Close - shut down, prohibit, ban, legislate against
Перефразируем.
Лексически:
Fast food outlets ought to be banned.
Грамматически:
It is highly recommended that fast food outlets be shut down.
Выбираем аргументы.
PRO
- It is a well-known fact that fast food is detrimental for people's health and people should be restrained from visiting points selling junk food and, what is more, to avoid the temptation it is better to ban them.
- Fast food influence badly the culture of eating, It is unpleasant to see people around munching hotdogs with dripping sauce or gnawing chicken right in the street, so outlets of fast food encouraging such improper behavior must be closed
- Fast food is often served with numerous packaging, predominantly plastic, disposable and not recyclable, thus fast food outlets harm the environment.
CON
- Fast food was designed as convenient food for people who have limited time and can waste it on cooking or waiting in the conventional restaurant.
- Fast food’s notorious fame is overestimated because, basically, it does not affect the quality, how quickly the food is cooked and served.
- Fast food is a part of entertainment, it is such a joy to watch the film in front of a big screen gnawing on something sweet or fatty, and, surely, calorific, such a stress-releasing guilty pleasure that one can indulge himself or herself in.
Остается написать заключение.
To summarize, fast food selling points are\ are not good to be under a ban.
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