Сегодня разберем тему эссе “Every city and every town should have a zoo”, как правильно перефразировать, привести аргументы и не уйти от темы.
Начнем с перевода на русский.
“Каждый город должен иметь зоопарк”.
Выделяем ключевые слова.
“Каждый город должен иметь зоопарк”.
Для таких ключевых слов невозможно подобрать синонимы, поэтому перефразируем только грамматически.
A zoo should be in every city and every town.
It is recommended that every city and town have a zoo.
Приступим к аргументации.
PRO
- Zoos play an important role in city life. They have an educational and entertaining function. Families with children visit zoos to get to know more about wild animals and see them with their own eyes.
- There is a severe problem with keeping and breeding wild animals which cannot live in the wild, so zoos are the only place where they find shelter and care. The more zoos are created the more animals can be saved.
- Zoos may appear to be a good basis for scientific research. Studying animals in the zoos scientists learn more about their behavior or diseases and that is a huge input into scientific research of any city or a town.
CON
- Keeping animals in captivity is an immoral practice and should be prohibited.
- Nowadays, when we can watch wild animals on TV or on the Internet, there is no need to have a zoo in every town or a city, people have all the opportunity to see wild animals and learn a lot without making them suffer in cages.
- Given that not every city or a town can afford keeping a zoo on a proper level, providing animals with sufficient space and excellent conditions and taking care of their welfare, there is no need to build a zoo in every city and a town.
Пишем заключение.
To sum up, zoos are\are not good to be in every city and every town.
От себя добавлю, что то состояние, в котором находятся отечественные зоопарки вызывает лишь боль. Аквапарки и цирки - кровь из глаз и сопереживание страдающим животным.
Очень надеюсь, что в будущем у нас появится больше заказников и центров реабилитации диких животных, а пропадут данные места, воспитывающие в детях равнодушие и жестокость.
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