Сегодня разберем тему “Extreme sports help to build character”, как и в прошлом разборе начнем с перевода и выделения ключевых слов:
“Экстремальные виды спорта помогают укрепить характер”
Выделяем смыслообразующие слова.
“Экстремальные виды спорта помогают укрепить характер”
Находим для них синонимы.
Extreme - risky, dangerous, involving a high degree of risk of serious physical harm.
Extreme sports - action, adventure sports, involving physical and mental challenges.
What are extreme sports in reality?
Теперь поговорим о закалке характера
Character - traits\sides\features\qualities
to build character - develop good moral qualities\ strengthen your character
Теперь, когда лексика готова, давайте перефразируем тему.
1. Мы можем поменять грамматику
- It is thought that extreme sports can help people build their character
2. Лексику
- Some people believe that dangerous sports help to develop a strong character.
Определяемся с точкой зрения и приводим аргументы за и против
PRO
- Extreme sports as well as other sports require self-discipline, stamina and strong will, so those who do sports regularly never lack such qualities.
- Extreme sports are really challenging and dangerous and to do such a risky activity one needs to overcome his or her fears and keep on doing despite possible injuries or the dread of death, that is possible only for determined and strong personalities.
- While doing extreme sports, especially such as racing or downhill skiing, connected with high speeds, a sportsman has to make decisions instantly and there is no place for indecisiveness.
CON
- Extreme sports are not often regarded as professional sports, and quite the opposite, people tend to take up such activities as hobbies in order to enjoy themselves and for the thrill of it, so we cannot assume a significant impact on their character in this case.
- People use the term ‘adrenaline junkie’ to describe fans of extreme sports and it underlines the weakness of character of those who cannot control their addiction to risk.
- Extreme sports are undeniably popular, because people who do such sports are thought to be brave and have a strong character, a huge amount of spectaculars enjoy watching thrilling shows, however, this attracts not serious and determined sportsmen, but attention seekers and those who want to earn much money in a very short time by doing some perilous activities.
При оформлении эссе не нужно забывать про организацию и структуру, вводить правильно statement sentence и контраргументацию в 4-м абзаце, а я лишь предложу варианты заключения
To sum up, extreme sports are \are not helpful in character building.
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