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Discussing Statistics

Hello dear readers.Today, I've come up with a new Sample Answer to one more Writing Task EGE-based ( Project) I used the data represented in the preparation course under the editorship of M Verbitskaya, EGE-2023, 20 variants, page 18. I've converted the data into a pie chart to get a brighter view.
Imagine that you are doing a project on why people in Zeltand move to small towns. You have found some data on the subject -- the results of the opinion polls ( see the data below ) Comment on the data in the table/chart  and give your opinion on the subject of the project

Write 200-250 words. 
Use the following plan:
-make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
-select and report 2-3 facts;
-make 1-2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
-outline a problem that can arise with moving to a small town and suggest a way of solving it;
-conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the advantages of living in small towns
Imagine that you are doing a project on why people in Zeltand move to small towns. You have found some data on the subject -- the results of the opinion polls ( see the data below ) Comment on the data in the table/chart and give your opinion on the subject of the project Write 200-250 words. Use the following plan: -make an opening statement on the subject of the project; -select and report 2-3 facts; -make 1-2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments; -outline a problem that can arise with moving to a small town and suggest a way of solving it; -conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the advantages of living in small towns

THE ANSWER:
What drives people to move to small towns is the subject of discussion today. Currently doing a project, the aim of which is to analyse why people in Zetland move to small towns, I have found statistics linked to the topic. I will discuss its data in the following essay.

As is seen from the pie chart, there are two manifest facts. First, the majority of the surveyed (37%) are appealed by the likelihood of experiencing a sense of community in small towns. Second, big houses in small towns are popular among a minority of respondents, with the figure of 8%.

Unsurprisingly, there are over two times as many people (28%) driven by the prospect of enjoying better ecology in small towns, compared with the 12% of respondents only appreciating no traffic jams. Judging from where I stand, it is plain to see why environmental problems on the whole are the area of concern among a bigger number of respondents. Human activities, industrial effluents, here include excessive amounts of car emissions increasing in traffic congestions, etc are global ecological issues causing people to leave megalopolises for small towns.

However, having moved to a small town, people can face a lack of communication. Improving social life could be effectively realised if the department of culture of a small town organised different public recreation areas to help people become an integral part of society .

As for me, life in a small town is advantageous.To compare with a hectic and costly life in a big city, a small town offers you tranquillity and harmony, lower housing and food prices.
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