В каждом из пяти абзацев эссе следует использовать связующие слова и фразы, обеспечивающие целостность и логичность высказывания. Без них невозможно получить максимальный балл по критерию "организация".
1.Introduction
Первым предложением в этой части эссе должно быть так называемое "topic sentence", вводящее читателя в тему. Его можно начать так:
Today (fashion, sport) becomes more influential than it was in the past.
Today people are getting more and more concerned about .....
No doubt that .....
It is obvious that ......
Modern society can`t do without ....
Далее мы приводим две точки зрения, не забывая о перефразе предложенной темы.
Some people think that....
At the same time others consider that this is a very controversial point of view.
Nowadays some people are sure that .....
Others believe that....
2. The body (your opinion)
Сначала лаконично и четко выражаем свою точку зрения по теме.
I strongly believe that ....
I agree with the point of view that ....
As far as I am concerned, I believe that ....
I do strongly support the idea that ...
Далее приводим 2-3 аргумента в защиту своей точки зрения:
Firstly,
Secondly,
Thirdly,
или же:
To begin with,
In addition\Moreover,
Finally.
3. The body (opposite opinion)
Nevertheless, we can find a contrary opinion. Some people are sure that ....
However, some people think that ...
At the same time, there is an opinion that ...
Далее приводим 1-2 аргумента в защиту противоположной точки зрения, используя линкеры, данные в " your opinion".
4. The body (your disagreement)
В этом абзаце важно четко и логично опровергнуть КАЖДЫЙ из аргументов противоположной точки зрения.
I totally disagree with this point of view. I am sure that ...
I think the above mentioned arguments are not convincing enough.
To my mind it is hard to accept this point of view because ...
As for me, I am not sure that it is true. I suppose that ...
5. Conclusion
В заключении еще раз, но более кратко, обозначаем свое мнение по теме.
All in all, I should stress that ...
To conclude, I would like to note that ...
To sum up, I would like to emphasize that ...
So, I can draw a conclusion that ...