About the social issues mentioned by the author
Parent-child problem: there is no perfect sense of good parents, but there is no "Fang Siqi's first love paradise" in the complete absence of the parents. Even Lin Yuanjiang, her mother is not completely missing, and Lin Yuanjiang's own complaint, after all, is just full of emotional narrative.“The old woman " in her diary is a sickening one, and the change in Lin Yuanjiang's mother herself may be another dutiful one.
I dare not say that Lin Yuanjiang's mother had no remorse at all, but from her own great obsession with the death of Chi-no-Yeh, she could see that she did not feel that she was missing or incompetent. In fact, she did not, Lin Yuanjiang mentioned the new home, the United States university, maybe her heart "the old woman" wanted to really supply her. Although her discipline is so irrational that it makes the mother of all distort, she is, after all, a qualified mother.
As for other people's parents and relatives, most are too common, the only thing worth mentioning is the grandfather of Ye Di. A swallow or good weather can not make the spring an see a leaf and know the twilight contrast, first read a little awkward, read two or three times will feel this is one of the few flashpoints in the book. Grandpa This is not the appearance of the character but is the wisest elder in the text, Lenovo to the late cyber mob against his attacks and abuse, sad sense of humor arises spontaneously.
Network violence: the text of the network violence is typical of the "Chinese", First abuse, and then with the rhythm of wanton discredit, to reach the top when the gourd mass attack "evil" slams the social criticism of everything, a small number of people began to profit or take the opportunity to attack the enemy.
In the era of dog fans and a small batch of articles still not mainstream spray subgroups, or add terrier flying, anti-black and mouth hi addiction.Of course, not surprisingly, there will be the reverse, then reverse and then reverse, people began to choose the side station and spray each other, as the decade of catastrophe in a narrow version. On the surface is the lack of social credibility and low level of education, in fact, eventually, fall to the main contradiction. Deprivation is the cause of all online violence, and the main contradiction is the cause of deprivation.
If Lin Yuanjiang's own story logic is more careful, and she is in the play, it will be better to mobilize the network violence, but in the network environment, 75 days later will be forgotten almost. However, the fate of a person, of course, depends on self-struggle, but also to take into account the progress of history. After more than a year in the making, the dog's fans will be able to put Ye Di clearly arranged, coupled with the small batch of play terrier, I'm afraid this thing in many years after will still be a similar thing will be a fiery piece. A year ago, Ye Di live if there is real, see today's scene, do not know will rejoice or will sigh.
Campus bullying: in Primrose Hill, many people involved in online violence and school bullies have the same reason-through a strong critique of what seems to be the most heinous thing to eliminate their own guilt arising from mistakes. Therefore, ye Di gives why do not you do not make friends with Lin Yuanjiang no one can, no one dare to give an answer.
It should be noted that the types of bullying on campus are numerous and can be summarized in the final analysis as "the bad nature of the destruction of beautiful things".
Defects of works
It's hard to find resonance in the journal.
Few people can understand the situation of the characters, but the good author can let the reader infinitely close to this point.For Lin Yuanjiang diary part, to tell the truth, and not much can make people feel the presence of factors.Very dark, very gloomy, but no nada, but no mental shock or memory overlap, as if a person pointing to a wall of blood-stained gray wall, tell me this is the cause of depression, this is gray, direct but not enough stripping cocoon. In addition, some of the Bridges made me think I was reading sad river flows into the river.
The core of the work is unknown
Indeed, this is the author's intention,he may want to do a Naipaul, or three Qing Qing, narrative but not argument. But that's why the book has lost its core. Look at the brief, that is hunting a class of works; open the first reading, that is time still campus; read again, it becomes a mixed body of various ideas.
In if snow is white, you can also find multiple cores - epiphany, judgment, self-interest, and so on, but by no means like Primrose as chaotic, because they are for motivation service.
The cover-up of Primrose Hill for motivation is so grossly inadequate-reading the diary can tell the killer's purpose and approach, and the pseudo-solution of low rationality-that it leads to the confounding of many core ideas, making the true core of the work impossible to reveal.
Not harmonious
"Primrose Hill" has the same problem as the sky is clear, which is that the atmosphere is not harmonious. A short one can be interpreted as a length, but a medium, or a long one, is somewhat disappointing.
Before the "IF and only if the snow is white" is often too Japanese, I think so people have not been to Japan. Japan, where many Japanese theorists write, is not entirely true."If snow is white," the world, it should be said, is a mixture of many places, but there is no lack of fluency and coherence.
But in "Primrose Hill" and the sky is clear, the author added some Chinese elements, such as 129 chorus, 12.13 Nanjing massacre victims of the National Public sacrifice day, Chinese-style fire drill, etc., but let the works appear increasingly nondescript, not only lost the original coherence and fluency, but also the overhead of the atmosphere is also discarded.
In addition, "Primrose" is not only guilty of cultural problems, but also the problem of space. Indeed, Lin Yuanjiang is a mismatch of the "ancients", but her living environment is like a dozen years ago in the community, this is also when I read The Diary of the thought "sad current into the river" the biggest reason.
In itself, such a disconnect is conducive to the performance of Lin Yuanjiang's own people, but the disconnection is not just Lin Yuanjiang. Ye Di, Lin mother and many other characters, like the old people living in the new society. This combination is like an awkward, Earthy Love word, the two different cultures of different time and space stiff stitched together, along with the sense of overhead erased, leaving a feather……
I believe that the writer's pen and experience are enough to support him to write a more excellent and fluent complex and profound works, only the time and the ability to try and make mistakes.
One-sided perception of youth fiction
Although the author pointed out that they already do not understand the youth novel, but "Primrose" on the youth of the novel is really a handful of slander.
In Shanghai magazine I personally understand as budding, before this year's college entrance examination, I almost read a year and a half of " budding."I can't say how good it is today, but diversity is certain, and there will also be the publication of the kind of works that Lin Yuanjiang has contributed."Bud" each issue will be published for the discussion of social hot and some well-known youth literature writers interview, and so many years Bud also dig see us horse thieves and other works and Wang ruoxu and other writers, it is for young writers to find and cultivate, is definitely greater than the merit.
As for some of the other youth fiction, from the early nothingness and kitsch, the quality of the past few years is also rising, even the writers are also trying to improve their works of Conservation, some with deep thinking and paranoid but not extreme arguments have a very deep discussion of significance.
To be honest, works like "if snow is white," in our city's bookstore, and youth literature together, it is expected that "Primrose bogey", probably so.I don't know what the writer would do if he saw this scene……