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It is not deniable that young people are interested in physical activities, but for different purposes. Currently working on a project on why youngsters in Zetland do sports, I have found relevant statistics surveys-based. I will comment on the data in the following essay.
Considering the statistical indicators, I can distinguish the two main factors. Firstly, the biggest number of respondents (35%) exercise to lose weight. Secondly, the least number of all participants (10%) see sports activities as an opportunity to improve their health.
Having compared some figures, I find it curious that there are over three times as many respondents (35%) looking into losing kilograms, compared with the 11% of participants encouraged by their parents' advice to do sports. I am of the opinion that the authority of parents is now reduced to a minimum amount of influence on children amid a review of the pervasive, massive influence of commercials advertising slimming through physical exercises.
At the same time, avoiding sports activities can lead to energy loss and gaining extra fats. To solve such a problem, I recommend people should allocate a minimum of 15 minutes a day for sports activities.
To summarise, I believe that doing sports is an essential part in the lives of teenagers. Physical culture builds up personal features. Exercising helps develop stamina at a young age, which stands youngsters in good stead for future life.
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